10 June 2008 @ 05:39 pm
[FIC] Bad Habit - Akame [R/NC-17]  
Title: Bad Habit
Genre: fluffish, not-too-glossy-but-not-too-graphic-lemon (can you tell I love to come up with genres? 8Dv)
Warnings: Yet again with the always present tentative humor thing and…well, porn :/

Rating:
R ~ NC-17
Wordcount: 2.096
Disclaimer:- KAT TUN is mine \8D/
Ok, so not really. Do you really have to throw it in my face like that? D8
Dedicated to:  [personal profile] razberrycreme
  (because all of my akame are belong to Raz and because it’s *grumbles* my turn) and  [profile] calvincakes  for prompting me to do this. Mention of Jin’s ‘beauty mark’ is – obviously - also dedicated to you, Minna ♥♥♥
Notes:
mostly un-bettaed (but looked over by the lovely  [profile] tinybars- ILU ♥) and lightly inspired by
Jin’s July 2008 Popeye Shoot
Summary:
Kame wants to keep his sheets intact. Jin is bad at quitting things.  Both are quite addicted to each other.




Kame wakes shivering slightly. There’s a sudden cold gust of air coming from somewhere near and he can feel it in his entire upper body, uncovered by the sheets. He could easily ignore it, pull the sheets back up to his neck and turn back around to where the bed is warmer but there’s something mixed in the cold breeze that stops him from doing so. 


It’s a smell. It tickles his nose in a weirdly familiar way and he turns his head in the direction he thinks the scent is coming from. He opens his eyes slowly when his brain finally makes the connection.


 

Smoke. Cigarette smoke.



His suspicions are confirmed by the sight that greets him. Just a few feet away, sitting on the cushioned ledge in front of the big glass window is Jin. He has a cigarette dangling from one hand, the red tip glistening bright against the dark sky. He is only wearing a pair of low riding soft pants and no t-shirt but the cold doesn’t seem to bother him in the least. 


Kame watches as Jin brings the cigarette to his lips and takes a drag, blows steam up into the night air and flicks the ashes out the window with a small, careless gesture. The breeze takes the smell to the bed and Kame breaths it in, closes his eyes and feels it washing over his senses, his nose tickling yet again.


He figures he must have made some kind of noise because when he opens his eyes again not two seconds later, Jin has turned his head in his direction and is looking at him.


 “You are awake,” Jin says, a small lopsided smile gracing his lips.


 “So are you,” Kame points out, quite unnecessarily.


 

“Can’t sleep,” the other replies bringing the cigarette back to his lips. It moves up and down comically in the corner of his mouth when he speaks next, not bothering to move it back to his fingers. “Did I wake you?”  


 “No,” Kame replies around a yawn, “cold woke me.” He scratches his chest absently, “And you should move away from that window. You are standing there half naked and what if there are paparazzi around and…”


Jin laughs at that, standing up to close the window. “You are so paranoid. It’s three in the freaking morning, there are no paparazzi around.”


 

Kame feels his face flush a little. It didn’t even occur to him that it was that late. He swallows the ever present urge to say something stupid like ‘well, you never know’ just to get the last word out, and buries his head back on the pillow instead, groaning something that sounds suspiciously like ‘fuck off’.


 

Jin takes pity on him. “I wouldn’t blame a paparazzi for wanting pictures of me like this, though” he says, and Kame watches as he bends over to pick up a bottle from the floor, making those pants drop impossibly low and giving him a tantalizing glimpse of backside. “I mean, those were probably going to sell pretty damn well.”



 “Sure,” Kame drawls, voice muffled into the pillow, “remind me to report that very idea to Johnny during our next meeting. Akanishi Jin half naked and smoking in front of my apartment window. Big seller.”  Kame readjusts then, turning properly on his side. He faces the window and lifts the corner of the sheet on the other side of the bed silently.


 

Jin turns in his direction and there’s a smirk dancing on his lips. He stops on the space between bed and window, holds the beer bottle in one hand and his still lit cigarette on the other and opens his arms wide.  He lifts one eyebrow in a silent dare.


Kame stares at him and can’t help but feel like his breath has just been stolen. Jin is barefooted, his hair is disheveled, his pants are almost falling off of his hips and there’s a faint glow from the streets lights framing the outline of his body against the dark night. He looks like nothing Kame hasn’t seen hundred of times before and yet he thinks that Jin has rarely looked that good.    


“Fine. It would be a big seller,” he concedes, “now come back to bed.”


Jin just smiles, puts his cigarette back on his lips and pads his way back to the bed. He places his bottle on the bedside table and sits on the mattress with his back against the headboard.   “You are so damn easy” he says amusedly as he moves a hand to Kame’s hair, gently places some strands behind the other’s ear.


Kame quickly props himself up on an elbow and takes Jin’s cigarette from his lips carefully. “And you should put that out.”


 

“What?” Jin asks, brows furrowed and fingers quickly reaching for Kame’s, “are you joining the no-smoking campaign now?”


 

“No,” Kame replies, easily moving the cigarette away from Jin’s reach, “I’m joining the ‘don’t let idiots set the sheets on fire’ campaign.”  He points a finger to a nearby desk. “There’s an ashtray over there, get it.”



Jin picks the object without protest and brings it to bed with him and Kame gives the cigarette back, careful of ashes falling on the sheets.



There’s a moment of silence as Jin takes a long drag and pointedly flicks the ashes on the ashtray, and Kame rolls his eyes at him. The smoke is still swirling slowly around his head when Jin speaks. “Why do you even have an ashtray around in your room? I thought you quit?”


“I did.” Kame replies, watching the smoke dissipate in the air. “But I…” he adds almost as an afterthought as his eyes focus on Jin’s face, “I have my setbacks.”



“Hm.” Jin says absently, no traces of judgment in his voice. “Sounds like you got yourself addicted.”


 

“Probably” Kame agrees somewhat reluctantly. “It’s a bad addiction to have” he adds, head falling back into the pillow. “Have you ever tried to quit?”


 

“Once” Jin says thoughtfully, “it didn’t work though, and I didn’t try again ever since.” He puts out the cigarette and lies on his side on the bed, head propped up on one hand while the other plays gently with the hair falling over Kame’s forehead. “I’m really bad at quitting stuff.”



“Yeah?” the other asks, closing his eyes. He feels relaxed in ways that have nothing to do with sleepiness, and smiles upon feeling the warm fingers travel quickly from hair to cheeks onto neck and collarbone.   


 

“Yeah” Jin whispers. “You could say I’m rather…” he starts only to let the phrase linger in the air, hands stopping their current exploration.


 

“Rather what?” Kame asks, opening his eyes just in time to see Jin slowly sucking two fingers into his mouth, smiling around the digits. When the same fingers come back to his skin, he gasps at the contact despite knowing it was coming.


“Rather fond” Jin replies with a leer, wet fingers finding a nipple and circling it delicately, “of my addictions.”


 

Kame breathes a chuckle at that, the exclamation of ‘you are so ridiculous’ dying on his throat and giving way to a small moan when he feels the fingers travel lower. He looks down at the hand currently caressing his stomach, covers it with one of his before looking back up.

 


He takes Jin’s hungry stare, the way his eyes travel slowly over his body and settle on his crotch for a moment before moving up to his face. Jin has a lazy smile that makes his intentions perfectly clear, but Kame asks anyway, his own lazy smile not helping him on trying to keep a very weak pretense up. “What do you think you are doing?”


 

“What does it look like I’m doing?” Jin says, lifting up from the mattress and yanking the sheet aside unceremoniously from Kame’s lower half. He places his legs on either side of Kame’s and settles over him, smiling wickedly as he then runs his hands firmly over the torso on display and watches a shiver run over the skin. “I’m setting the sheets on fire.”


 

Kame laughs out loud. “You are so ridiculous”, he manages this time, voice full of mirth.


Jin doesn’t bother with an answer to that and cups Kame through his pants instead. He chuckles when the other arches momentarily off the bed, a loud gasp escaping his lips. “You were saying?” he asks, hand kneading harder. 



Kame ignores the question, a smirk his only warning before he changes the game completely, moves Jin’s unoccupied hand to his mouth and starts licking his fingers.

 


Jin pants and watches as Kame guides his hand back to his chest and over the previously neglected nipple, caressing it. “You are such a fucking tease” he hisses, rubbing harder between his legs and pinching the nub lightly in retaliation.


 

Kame’s lips open around a loud moan and Jin takes the opportunity to lie over the body under his. He licks inside Kame’s mouth once, twice, and stays close, his fingers slipping under the waistband of the other’s pants and curling expertly around his cock.


 

Kame closes his eyes and starts rocking, body setting a rhythm. He slips both hands through Jin’s hair, keeps him close enough to share breath and makes him move with him. He does it for a while, stopping only when he opens his eyes again and looks down, takes notice of Jin’s neglected erection tenting his pants.


He grips Jin’s wrist and halts his movements just before pushing both of their pants mid thigh and out of the way. Kame pulls the other’s body closer then, rocks harder, hisses in pleasure when he feels Jin’s cock sliding next to his own.

 


“Do us both” he commands and it takes Jin only a second to comply, his broad hand closing around both their members and pulling roughly.

 


“Yes” Kame exhales hotly. He holds Jin’s face with both hands and showers him with open mouthed kisses. He bites his chin and his earlobe, licks and kisses the mole on the corner of his right eye and rubs their cheeks together before finally kissing him full on the lips.

 


He has his tongue inside Jin’s mouth when he comes, and has to stop kissing as pleasure shoots straight through his brain. He drops boneless against the sheets and tries to catch his breath back.

When a drop of sweat falls on his cheek and makes him look up he meets Jin’s heated gaze with one of his own and moves. 



Jin gets quickly overwhelmed when a second hand joins his and pulls harder, quicker. Kame’s sight, feel and smell all over him coupled with the frantic rhythm of his hand, pushes him over the edge after just a few seconds.

 

Their harsh panting fills the air for a couple of minutes before Kame kisses Jin’s damp forehead, gently pushes him off of him. Jin rolls around and props himself up, leans back against the headboard yet again. He reaches for a tissue box on the bedside table and passes it to Kame. “Here.”


 

Kame cleans himself up quickly and watches as Jin lights up a cigarette, watches as he takes a slow drag, blowing steam up into the air. The smoke dances around him and Kame stares at it entranced. He feels himself desperately craving the feel of nicotine on his tongue and the need might have shown in his expression somehow because not a moment later, Jin is wordlessly giving him the lit cigarette.


Kame accepts it without a word and takes a long drag. He holds the smoke inside his mouth for a few seconds, letting it escape slowly, its delicate curls dancing upwards and into the air of the room. 


He gives the cigarette back to Jin, feels a very small pang of guilty already nibbling the corners of his brain for having yet another setback. “
You make bad habits look fucking good” he blurts out suddenly as Jin puts the cigarette back on his own lips.  

 


The other smirks knowingly at that.
“I guess you are one of my bad habits then” he says, “cause you look really fucking good right now.”


Kame punches him in the arm.


“It’s true!” Jin protests around a laugh, gently rubbing his abused arm. “If I wasn’t so spent, I would do you in a 
heartbeat.”

 


“Again?” Kame asks, one finely shaped eyebrow rising cynically.


“What can I say?” Jin smiles, placing the cigarette back on Kame’s lip.  “I’m really bad at quitting stuff.”


***************
Real life update comes after Jin gym later today \:o/
*runs*  
 
 
Current Mood: rushed
 
 
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[identity profile] salamandere.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
aiiie! i mean, I don't even intimately know this pair and yet it was such a good fic! miicaaaakes! you're so good! and you're so funny! :i'm setting the sheets on fire: I laughed so outloud! heheh devious devious!! you're just really so masterful! <-- YES I WILL ALWAYS CALL YOU THIS!

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[identity profile] salamandere.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 09:36 pm (UTC)
OMG FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIRST ♥
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[identity profile] tinybars.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 10:11 pm (UTC)
You already know. ♥♥
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[identity profile] calvincakes.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 10:47 pm (UTC)
IF YOU EVER NEED A TRANSPLANT, YOU KNOW, KIDNEY, LIVER, HEART, BRAIN--NO WAIT, MY BRAIN IS TOTALLY USELESS AND THAT'S NOT EVEN POSSIBLE YET--I'VE GOT YOU COVERED.

lsdnjahf;nsfjk. *whimpers* this was absolutely perfect, honey, and ndjfhasdf i don't even know what to say right now. sweet jesus, you really made kame lick it. i love you. snfjahsdf. ♥ ♥
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[identity profile] misao-duo.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:25 pm (UTC)
HI YOU ♥ *clings*
I AM NOT REALLY IN NEED OF A TRANSPLANT AT THE MOMENT BUT IF YOU EVER FEEL LIKE GETTING RID OF YOUR HAIR I WILL GLADLY TAKE IT INTO MY CUSTODY :DDDD

I am so happy that you read it *glompage of joy*
I was a bit worried that you were going to miss it or something nevermind that I would probably have linked you *coughs*
jdaposjd keysmashing is good! Not knowing what to say is good too, I suppose =D
And yes, of course I made Kame lick it. I told you I was going to , didn't I?
I'm sorry for making it such a quick scene, though. can you tell I was having a hard time with this almost-lemon? :/
I could totally write a fic drabble solely about Kame perving on that mole and and...I don't know, maybe I will do it for you someday? =D
jdpaosjdpao I love you too. I also happen to love your icon QUITE A LOT. *loves you even more*
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[identity profile] calvincakes.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
HIIIIII *clings back*

I just replied to an older thread of ours and raped capslock like whoa. All because of this fic. See, I can't get over the awesomeness and nsdkfjhajshdf I love you. And sure dude, my hair's yours. Though you should know it's not really that shiny and I have more split ends than Johnny has money.

And at 'a fic drabble solely about Kame perving on that mole' my brain kind of turned into a puddle of goo. Permanently. *________* I CAN'T POSSIBLY BE COHERENT NOW.

(:D thanks!)

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[identity profile] misao-duo.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 06:48 pm (UTC)
*_________*~♥

I just got both of your comments on my inbox and they made me really really happy. CAPSLOCK RAPING VERY MUCH INCLUDED, OF COURSE. They also signalized the beggining of 'spaming Minna' time since work is being meh and talking to you is much more fun! \:D/

I LOVE YOU TOO TONS AND I ALSO LOVE YOUR HAIR DESPITE THE SPLIT ENDS *clings to both of you*

It would have to be a drabble because a 4802938094 words fic about how we Kame loves the mole might be a little too much XD
But a drabble would be cool. With lots of lovely internal monologue and hair petting and face smelling or something. Kame sitting in front of Jin and pushing his hair back to look at him. And Jin would be all like 'What are you doing?', and Kame would be like , 'I'm looking at you', and Jin would be all 'Why?' and Kame would say, 'Because I really enjoy looking at you'
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww [/sapfest]

(graphic genius is you ♥)
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[identity profile] calvincakes.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
*has just loaded herself with coffee*

Being an insomniac, that's exactly the thing to do at 10.30pm. I take really good care of myself, ahaha.

'SPAMMING MINNA TIME'! ALRIGHT! I LIKE THE SOUND OF THAT! Whatever I can do to make work more bearable, bb. ^_________^

Lnjsahjhsdf I'm practically squeeing all over the place already. I love hair petting and omg, face smelling in fics and sharing breath and kissing without lips really touching and---nsdkjhasd. I FULLY APPROVE THIS SAPFEST. <3 And I love fast you can come up with stuff. Seriously, you're my hero.

(Which reminds me, did you want me to icon Oricon!Kame for you? ♥)
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[identity profile] misao-duo.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 07:59 pm (UTC)
Isn't 10.30pm too early to be an insomniac? At this time of the day (night?) I'm still frolicking around on LJ like the retard that I am =P

You should be loading yourself with coffe if you are sick, though!
You make sure to ingest lots of fluids to compensate because coffee is not good for the flu, hmmmkay?

By simply talking to me you make work much more bearable, bb ^______^
That's why 'Spamming Minna Time' is such a happy time of the day ♥

Hair petting is kinda awesome, yeaaah *drools* And jdpasojdaopjsd GOOD GOD WILL YOU STOP LIVING INSIDE MY HEAD FOR A SECOND? I AM JUST KIDDING, OF COURSE. DON'T U EVER STOP Your mention of shared breath and kissing without lips really touching killed me. KILLED ME GOOD. It's one of my many kinkies, you see? (as I'm sure I made clear in a particular scene of the smoking!fic. Namely when Jin licks inside Kame's mouth instead of kissing him djapodjaopsjd).
My speedy for coming up with Akame stuff is clearly due to the fact that my mind took residence in the Akame gutter. It's a beautiful place despite the 'guter' in the title.

(Ohhhhh ♥
There are lots of pretty Kames around just begging to be iconized, to be honest. Would you be up to iconizing anything from Wink Up? :3
I am ridiculously in love with the pics from that shoot)

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[identity profile] calvincakes.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 08:40 pm (UTC)
No yeah, it is, only sissies go to bed at 10.30pm. But the effects of coffee tend to stay with me for a, let's just say, a long time. This one time, I had some imported espresso in the evening and I didn't sleep a wink all night. And one other time, while having a movie night with a friend, she gave me a can of Battery and I kept babbling and bouncing for hours and kind of ruined The Painted Veil for her. ("Jesus christ, I'd do Edward Norton in a heart beat! Would you? WOULD YOU??")It's not like I'm overly sensitive to caffeine, it's just that it gets me going. Really going. My body/caffeine = OTP. (haha, you've noticed my habit of making otp's out of ridiculous things, right?)

I FEEL HONORED TO HAVE A SPECIAL TIME SLOT IN YOUR DAY OMG. <3

Lnsjfhjadsf it's definitely one of my kinks, too. As well as biting, leaving nail marks and all other kinds of marks, nuzzling, pinning hands down...dfhjashdf. I think about these things way too much, obviously. But what can I say, Akame gutter is indeed a beautiful place.

(Sure thing!)
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[identity profile] haraamis.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
*grins* Nice one! *happy sigh* they are just so....pretty. and pretty hot, too. ^_~

“Do us both” he commands

unf. just...unf. *_*

Not sure why this one line got me, but it did. ^_^

♥!
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[identity profile] taintedkibou.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 12:13 am (UTC)
Senseeeii... if it wasn't for the fact that I was sitting beneath my fan and it's going moderately fast, I'd probably be standing in the open fridge trying to cool down~ D8 and no, it's not summer heat xD

I like sensei's "not-too-glossy-but-not-too-graphic-lemons" cuz they're better than mine~~ XD
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[identity profile] razberrycreme.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 12:20 am (UTC)
Ahhh, the imagery is so perfect *___* Even though I admit I hate smoking. XD Jin and Kame's conversation is so cute and fussy and adorable ♥ PLUS YOU TOTALLY SMEXED THEM UP!!!

The last few lines ♥

Uhhuh, I SEEEEE, AND WHO'S THE CHEATER NOW STILL YOU! :PP
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[identity profile] sumomo-yuki.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
-sputters like an old car... it's soooooo freaking awesome!!!
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[identity profile] allboutp.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
hahaha...gal dat was hawt!
n damn smexy hihi!
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[identity profile] soulnet-haven.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:58 am (UTC)
asghdh;kungh-THIS, THIS-

*_________________*

Kame trying so hard to keep Jin in check and Jin smirking because he knows and and srsktl;j-all while smoking-

Words fail me. I would comment more if I could, but good fic makes me taciturn. :|

So have this as a substitute instead?



Runs off*





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[identity profile] akame-hime.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:17 am (UTC)
"You make bad habits look fucking good"
I think Jin can make anything look fucking good :p
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[identity profile] newssuki.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:51 am (UTC)
yeifefhahwuejhjvfhdjkjeyijewjbd *keysmashing* yeay \o/
hahahha oh goshhh tht's f*ckin awesome!!!!
oh gal~ i love ur writing style =D
seriously jin can make anything 'looking, touching, smelling, smirking, or whateva!' f*cking gooooddd.. XDDDD &hearts
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[identity profile] asmilewaiting.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 03:11 am (UTC)
This is great :3 That photoshoot really way absolute sex xD I love the way you wrote Jin in this ^.^ The whole feeling of the fic is really down to earth. I like it a lot ^_^
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[identity profile] enchanted1312.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 04:34 am (UTC)
somehow, i don't think qutting is that good if it's kame jin' talking abt. lol, really how smut but i really like the beginning. how jin sat on the window sill, there's this gentl aura. ^^
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[identity profile] kiyousei.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
“You make bad habits look fucking good”

you kno.. that was my exact thought when I saw Jin in Popeye's new issue XD

that man is the ONLY person who can smoke and drink and make it look SO. DAMN. HOT. if cigarettes company used him... oh man, everyone would have lung cancer XD bad boy with vices image suits him

great fic! i LOVED it!
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[identity profile] endah96.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:55 am (UTC)
well Kame always good and if I have bad habit named Kamenashi KAzuya I would never stopped!
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[identity profile] ylhen12.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 06:00 am (UTC)
thi is totally good^____^
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[identity profile] amairo-parasol.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 06:38 am (UTC)
OMG THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AFTER THE POPEYE PHOTOSHOOT *___*

He has a cigarette dangling from one hand, the red tip glistening bright against the dark sky. He is only wearing a pair of low riding soft pants and no t-shirt but the cold doesn’t seem to bother him in the least.

asdlkasd Just imagining that *drools*

I really, really liked this. It's fluffy and sexy all at the same time, and I especially loved the whole "bad habit" thing that tied everything together.

“I guess you are one of my bad habits then” he says, “cause you look really fucking good right now.” laskdsd JIN ♥
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[identity profile] eragon22.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 07:16 am (UTC)
This was so so effing hot...
And Jin does make bad habits look really good...and he IS bad at quitting things, though who could blame him *coughKamecough*
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[identity profile] tsuki-3.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)


Jin is barefooted, his hair is disheveled, his pants are almost falling off of his hips and there’s a faint glow from the streets lights framing the outline of his body against the dark night. He looks like nothing Kame hasn’t seen hundred of times before and yet he thinks that Jin has rarely looked that good.

That's like the ultimate sex Jin man :D
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[identity profile] aishikuranai873.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:38 pm (UTC)
Amazing @.@ just...amazing
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[identity profile] ayuzak.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC)
U are amazing....OMG so hot...incoherent...and you've got their characters nailed.This is perfect.
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[identity profile] helzfyah.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 02:03 pm (UTC)
hot and awesome!
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[identity profile] matchynishi.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
lasdkjf oh, jin. *_* It's so true, he makes everything look SO GOOD askldfjd and Kame DOES look good too and skdfjldkjf lmao this was so cute and alskdjf JIN. *_*
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[identity profile] sayurikimura.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:16 pm (UTC)
is it me or is it getting hot in here... *melts*
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[identity profile] suteii.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 05:35 pm (UTC)
mmmmmm that was soooooo good
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[identity profile] destka.livejournal.com on June 11th, 2008 09:57 pm (UTC)
that was fucking awesome.
I love You. omg~ I love You for this one so much <3
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[identity profile] lovetoujours.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 03:16 am (UTC)
adkjshflkjasd i forgot to post my comment XD *dumb*

THAT WAS SO CUTE. AND REALLY REALLY HOT, BUT SUPER CUTE AT THE SAME TIME.

I can see why Jin is addicted >.>

and bad kame, smoking.

I loved it, my ryotaaaan ♥
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[identity profile] marlenem.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 10:05 am (UTC)
This was sooooo goooood! *_____* So hot and amazing and....... I just love you even more *q*
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[identity profile] 6thwound.livejournal.com on June 12th, 2008 01:46 pm (UTC)
where is the real life update D:. me misses being nonsense for uuu ;_;
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snowaltz: Jin hot[personal profile] snowaltz on June 14th, 2008 02:56 pm (UTC)
I got rec to read this and it's really fabulous. *thumbs up*

“You make bad habits look fucking good”
And I totally agree with this line here.
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[identity profile] misao-duo.livejournal.com on June 14th, 2008 04:01 pm (UTC)
*perks*
You got recced? =O
Can I be super curious and perhaps ask who was the kind soul who recced me?
Oh, and I'm glad you liked it ;D

Also...well...Jin DOES look fucking good doing anything so...no surprises about that line, really ;D
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snowaltz: Jin[personal profile] snowaltz on June 14th, 2008 05:07 pm (UTC)
It's [livejournal.com profile] luciene ;)

I can seriously imagine this story happening in real life. You wrote well =D

I'm not a fan of smoking but I can't help and think that Jin makes smoking looks good >.
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[identity profile] ironic-sun.livejournal.com on June 17th, 2008 04:55 pm (UTC)
*drools*

I think Akame is my bad habit.
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[identity profile] psychooog.livejournal.com on June 18th, 2008 06:27 am (UTC)
uwaah!! this feels really intimate and it's not just the sex that feels like that but...THEM! ok, i have become incomprehensible...i need to keep a keen eye out for the 'not-too-glossy-but-not-too-graphic-lemon' genre from now on
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[identity profile] a-addicted.livejournal.com on July 10th, 2008 08:05 pm (UTC)
waaah.. amaziinng.. hot hott~
akame is also my bad habit, haha
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[identity profile] lilzazu.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 10:05 am (UTC)
WHY HAVEN'T I SEE THIS?!?!?!?!

“Do us both” he commands

you killed me. I have to say that i don't like smoking much but the whole habit...and the end where kame says bad habit looks good and jim comments back...

i loved this fic!

now write me some 1x2!! (actually i can sorta see this as a 1x2 AU fic so i'll forgive a little XD)
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[identity profile] kazuyachan.livejournal.com on October 4th, 2009 10:37 pm (UTC)
haha do you do me ;p that reminded me of some song and some other story
good one dear
thank you much ;p
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